Vabini jivan hobe eto eka
tumi chara sab thekeo jeno faka,
tumi jakhan chile jivan chilo eto valo
takhon rater andhokaro mone hoto aalo,
tomar sangsparshey ki chilo jadu!
sotti bolchi tomar satotai chilam kabu,
tomar moner katha jeneo bujhina
sotti kore boloto tumi ki amai ajo vabona?
tumi bolechile balcony te bose amar path chaow
sab jeneo mone prosno jagey tumi ki amai sotti sotti chaow?
ha ami beche achi tumi chara
issh tumi jodi bujhte tumi chara j ami sab hara,
janina 'God' keno esob soichi
ei dekho ami kadte kadte bolchi,
ami ar parbona kichu bolte
tai theme gelam ei kobita likhtey likhtey.
tumi chara sab thekeo jeno faka,
tumi jakhan chile jivan chilo eto valo
takhon rater andhokaro mone hoto aalo,
tomar sangsparshey ki chilo jadu!
sotti bolchi tomar satotai chilam kabu,
tomar moner katha jeneo bujhina
sotti kore boloto tumi ki amai ajo vabona?
tumi bolechile balcony te bose amar path chaow
sab jeneo mone prosno jagey tumi ki amai sotti sotti chaow?
ha ami beche achi tumi chara
issh tumi jodi bujhte tumi chara j ami sab hara,
janina 'God' keno esob soichi
ei dekho ami kadte kadte bolchi,
ami ar parbona kichu bolte
tai theme gelam ei kobita likhtey likhtey.
Shundor... Tomar mathai je lekhalikhir poka ache jantam na to!!
ReplyDeletegenius,valo sobai bastey pare,kintu nijer valobasatake kobitar madhyome porishkar vabe kojon futiye tulte pare??ohhh fantastic!
ReplyDeleteHATS OFF!!!!!!!!!!!
abey arnab ki bokchis osab kchu na:)
ReplyDeleteOuff!!! Ghyama diecchen boss.! I wish jar jonne lekha se t0mar kache fire asuk!!
ReplyDeleteamar kichu balar nei, jadi ei kabita ta lekhar jonno tor samay na thakto tahole hoyto tui besi haste partis..........
ReplyDeletePayer main hota hai tadap,
ReplyDeletehota hai tadpana!!
Is k bina koi aasiq,
baan ta nahi "DEEWANA"!!
Being uor childhood friend I know its very painful to u.Bt its realy great oneeeee.
gr88..........darun jus awesum kobita ta...
ReplyDeleteheart felt expressions portrayed in d most amazing way...satti mon k chue jae..
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ReplyDeleteThe most touching of all the poems..tumi tokhoni best kobita lekho jokhon tomar modhe koster intensity ta onek bere jaye...ami chaibona tumi khub bhalo kobita lekho kenoki setar mane hobe tumi aro beshi kosto onubhob koro...title diechile-"feel it"-sottie bolte I felt the pain, the longing, may be I saw the tears which fell on the paper and made it wet when you penned those beautiful lines..you sculpted the structure with the hands of your emotions, your pain..so it cannot be less than anything but your best..thanks for sharing this one with me..I also felt familiar with the emotions expressed through this....
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